What was your best travel experience so far?
학생이 쓴 원문
I traveled Natrang in Vietnam twice.
This is the first time that I go to same place to travel.
Because I satisfied my first visiting in Natrang, I visited there again.
The food in Natrang is good for me.
Vietnamese food is similar with Korean food, so I didn\'t have any repulsion.
강사 첨삭
Hi! I’m so happy you put in the effort to complete the homework. You did a brilliant job sharing your experiences—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I traveled Natrang in Vietnam twice.
>> I traveled to Nha Trang, Vietnam, twice.
OR >> I have visited Nha Trang, Vietnam, twice.
This is the first time that I go to same place to travel.
>> This is the first time I have traveled to the same place more than once.
Because I satisfied my first visiting in Natrang, I visited there again.
>> Because I was satisfied with my first visit to Nha Trang, I decided to go there again.
The food in Natrang is good for me.
>> The food in Nha Trang suited my taste.
Vietnamese food is similar with Korean food, so I didn\'t have any repulsion.
>> Vietnamese food is similar to Korean food, so I didn\'t feel any resistance to it.
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