What was your best travel so far? Can you describe it?
학생이 쓴 원문
I had been travel a Japan.
City of Ginza was the best.
GINZA has a Luxury street.
THERE WERE Various buildings.
For example Chanel, Louis Vuitton, Guzzi etc...
I don\'t like a Luxury Item,
but I interested Building Design.
There were Various buildings design, tour was best.
강사 첨삭
You must have really enjoyed that, Soolyn! Anyway, please be careful with capitalizations. Words in the middle of a sentence should not be capitalized except for proper nouns.-Faith-
I had been travel a Japan.>> I had traveled to Japan.
City of Ginza was the best.
City of Ginza was the best.
>> The City of Ginza was the best.
GINZA has a Luxury street.
GINZA has a Luxury street.
>> Ginza has a luxury street.
THERE WERE Various buildings.
THERE WERE Various buildings.
>> There were various buildings.
For example Chanel, Louis Vuitton, Guzzi etc...
For example Chanel, Louis Vuitton, Guzzi etc...
>> For example Chanel, Louis Vuitton, Guzzi, etc.
I don\'t like a Luxury Item, but I interested Building Design.
I don\'t like a Luxury Item, but I interested Building Design.
>> I don\'t like a luxury item, but I am interested in building designs.
There were Various buildings design, tour was best.
There were Various buildings design, tour was best.
>> There were various building designs there and that was the best part of my tour.
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