what was your biggest failure in your career? and what did you learn from it

2019-10-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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I didn\'t give much praise to the employees when I worked at the bank. My eyes were high and there weren\'t many employees who actually worked well, but I had a habit of not complimenting them naturally.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for making these wonderful compositions. See you later in class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate

I didn\'t give much praise to the employees when I worked at the bank. 
>>CORRECT!
My eyes were high and there weren\'t many employees who actually worked well, but I had a habit of not complimenting them naturally.
>>My standards were high and there weren\'t many employees who actually work well but I didn\'t make a habit of casually complimenting them. 

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