What was your dream job?
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I had dream jobs a lot when I was little like cops, fire fighter, a president and baseball player. At that time, I used to dream jobs whatever I want to be. But now, I\'m approaching the wall as a reality. :)
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Hi Elic!
Thank you for doing your homework. Have a great night ahead ^^
I had dream jobs a lot when I was little like cops, fire fighter, a
president and baseball player. At that time, I used to dream jobs
whatever I want to be. But now, I\'m approaching the wall as a reality.
:)
>> I had a lot of dream jobs when I was little, like being a cop, a firefighter, a baseball player and a President of Korea. At that young age, I used to dream the jobs that I want but now, the reality is different.
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