What was your dream job when you were young?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I wanted to work for government office. I was born and raised in the countryside. I was envy someone who lived in neighberhood and got a job where she worked for government. So I had dreamed to be a official since I saw her. I ended up grew up to be a official.
강사 첨삭
Well done, Angel! I would like to congratulate you not only for this wonderful homework but also for achieving your dream job. You are incredible!-Faith-
When I was young, I wanted to work for government office. >> When I was young, I wanted to work for a government office.
I was born and raised in the countryside.
>> CORRECT
I was envy someone who lived in neighberhood and got a job where she worked for government.
>> I envied someone who lived in our neighborhood and got a job for the government.
So I had dreamed to be a official since I saw her.
>> So, I had dreamed to be a government official since I saw her.
I ended up grew up to be a official.
>> Consequently, I ended up being one.
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