What was your favorite concert?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite concert was piano concert. It was jazz concert which has several pianists played some classical music. The harmony was good to hear and the performances was fantastic. I never forget that time.
강사 첨삭
I wonder how everybody was enjoying that time, [이름]! I am sure it was worth it!-Faith-
My favorite concert was piano concert. >> My favorite concert was the piano concert.
It was jazz concert which has several pianists played some classical music.
>> It was a jazz concert which had several pianists who played some classical music.
The harmony was good to hear and the performances was fantastic.
>> CORRECT
I never forget that time.
>> I would never forget that time.
OR It was memorable.
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