What was your favorite food as a child?

2022-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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When I was at child. I really liked the fast foods like chicken, pizza and hamburger. But as I got older, I couldn\'t digest well now. So I\'m getting further away from them.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

I used to love those too. Actually, I still love them now. HAHAHA! Nothing has changed.

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When I was at child. I really liked the fast foods like chicken, pizza and hamburger.

>> When I was a child, I really likes eating fast food like fried chicken, pizza and hamburger.

But as I got older, I couldn\'t digest well now.

>> But as I got older, I couldn\'t digest well so I try to stay further away from those.

So I\'m getting further away from them.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

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