What was your favorite food as a child? Explain in detail.

2022-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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When I was young, I used to like mackerel dishes. (Not raw ones.) I always loved mackerel dishes, and everyday I ate them. But now, I don\'t like mackerel dishes a lot. But I don\'t hate them. The only thing that I know is my favorite food were mackerel dishes, but they had changed.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! 

That\'s something new. Usually kids love to fast food but yours was different. You are unique. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

When I was young, I used to like mackerel dishes. (Not raw ones.)
>>When I was young, I used to like mackerel dishes but not the raw ones. 

 mackerel dishes, and everyday I ate them.
>> I liked mackerel dishes and I ate them almost everyday. 

But now, I don\'t like mackerel dishes a lot.
>> But I don\'t like them as much as I did before. 

But I don\'t hate them.
>> I don\'t hate them as well. 

The only thing that I know is my favorite food were mackerel dishes, but they had changed.
>> That\'s the only thing that I know but it has changed already. 

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