What was your favorite spot on your university campus? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, I can\'t remember the name, but there was a place like pavilion where there was a spinning wheel and a lot of water fell, and all around it was a place where cherry blossoms bloom, so the scenery was really beautiful in spring. So, I spread a mat and drank with my friends and seniors in each department as if they were on a picnic.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
Thank you for sharing about your favorite spot and your wonderful memory about it. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
Well, I can\'t remember the name, but there was a place like pavilion where there was a spinning wheel and a lot of water fell, and all around it was a place where cherry blossoms bloom, so the scenery was really beautiful in spring.
Well, I can\'t remember the name, but there was a place like pavilion where there was a spinning wheel and a lot of water fell, and all around it was a place where cherry blossoms bloom, so the scenery was really beautiful in spring.
>> Well, I can’t remember the name, but there was a pavilion-like place with a water wheel and flowing water. It was surrounded by cherry blossoms, so the scenery was really beautiful in spring.
So, I spread a mat and drank with my friends and seniors in each department as if they were on a picnic.
>> So, I spread out a mat and drank with my friends and seniors from each department as if we were on a picnic.
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