What was your favorite subject?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite subject was English.
Learning grammar is still hard for me, but speaking English makes me broaden my view and had variety of experiences.
I experienced a whole new world and culture by communicate with foreigner and live in abroad.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Rachel!
It is so good to see you here on this page! You are not only good at speaking, also in writing! As you can see, you have one very good sentence and one perfect sentence.
I have underlined the grammar suggestions and they are simply about subject-verb agreement as well s verb form consistency in a sentence.
It is quite obvious that English is your favorite subject since you gained mastery in this language over time. This language will surely take you to places you have never been before and meet people who will make your life more prosperous and joyful.
Excellent job! See you in class soon.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Learning grammar is still hard for me, but speaking English makes me broaden my view and had variety of experiences.
>> Learning grammar is still hard for me, but speaking English makes me broaden my view and creates a variety of experiences. Very good sentence!
I experienced a whole new world and culture by communicate with foreigner and live in abroad.
I experienced a whole new world and culture by communicate with foreigner and live in abroad.
>> I experienced a whole new world and culture by communicating with foreigners and living abroad.
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