What was your favorite subject in school?
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my favorite subject is music class.
>> My favorite subject is music.
I thought that was easy for me, exciting to learn anything about music.
>> I found it easy and exciting to learn anything about music.
I’m sorrowful when I was young. because if I tried to learn music more than exercise?
>> I used to feel a sense of sorrow when I was young because I prioritized learning music over exercise.
my life was changed than now.
>> My life has changed since then.
but I like that my choice when i was younger than now,
>> However, I appreciate the choices I made when I was younger more than I do now.
anyway, the reason why am i studying english is that i want to study music in the united state.
>> The reason I am studying English is that I want to pursue a music education in the United States.
i want to be there!!
>> I want to be there!
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