What was your favorite subject in school?

2023-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Maxine

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What was your favorite subject in school? my favorite subject is music class. I thought that was easy for me, exciting to learn anything about music. I’m sorrowful when I was young. because if I tried to learn music more than exercise? my life was changed than now. but I like that my choice when i was younger than now, anyway, the reason why am i studying english is that i want to study music in the united state. i want to be there!!

강사 첨삭

Hello, Samuel! 

Your passion for music is inspiring. I can see that your past choices have led you to where you are now. Pursuing music in the United States is a great goal, and your enthusiasm shines through. Best of luck on your journey!

~ Teacher Maxine

my favorite subject is music class.

>> My favorite subject is music.

I thought that was easy for me, exciting to learn anything about music.

>> I found it easy and exciting to learn anything about music.

I’m sorrowful when I was young. because if I tried to learn music more than exercise?

>> I used to feel a sense of sorrow when I was young because I prioritized learning music over exercise.

my life was changed than now.

>> My life has changed since then.

but I like that my choice when i was younger than now,

>> However, I appreciate the choices I made when I was younger more than I do now.

anyway, the reason why am i studying english is that i want to study music in the united state.

>> The reason I am studying English is that I want to pursue a music education in the United States.

i want to be there!!

>> I want to be there!


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