What was your favorite toy when you were a child? Who gave you this toy? Did it have a name? Do you
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I have my favority toy still now. I couldn\'t remember exactly.
I think, when I was 7 years old. My mother bought it for me.
It is a husky doll. It is funny, my teacher maine has husky too.
I like animals dolls since I was child. especially dog dolls.
My first doll was dog and my favorite doll was second, and it also dog.
I like soft and smooth things. That husky doll has so soft texture.
I alwasy gave my doll anytime, anywhere. Even when I go to the trip, or vacation I carried that doll.
And I gave name to puppy doll.
That name is \"YOi\". I don\'t know why I choose that name.
Now, I still have Yoi. I throw away another dolls but I can\'t throw Yoi.
Every time I go home I sleep together with Yoi. :)
Now that doll is important thing for me beyond a doll.
It is like amulet to keep me. :)
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Hello [이름] [이름]!
It\'s really a surprise. Kids and ladies love these kinds of toys. Keep your lovely toy with you. Take a good time with your stuffed toy when you are alone. ^^
It\'s really a surprise. Kids and ladies love these kinds of toys. Keep your lovely toy with you. Take a good time with your stuffed toy when you are alone. ^^
~T. Maine
>> I still have my favorite toy.
I couldn\'t remember exactly.
>> I couldn\'t remember it exactly.
I think, when I was 7 years old.
I think, when I was 7 years old.
>> I think when I was 7 years old,
My mother bought it for me.
>> my mother bought it for me.
It is a husky doll.
It is a husky doll.
>> Correct.
>>It is a husky dog stuff toy.
It is funny, my teacher maine has husky too.
>> It is funny because my teacher has a husky too.
I like animals dolls since I was child. especially dog dolls.
I like animals dolls since I was child. especially dog dolls.
>> I have liked stuffed animals since I was a child, especially dog stuffed toys.
My first doll was dog and my favorite doll was second, and it also dog.
My first doll was dog and my favorite doll was second, and it also dog.
>> My first doll was a dog as well as my second doll.
I like soft and smooth things.
I like soft and smooth things.
>> Correct.
That husky doll has so soft texture.
>> That husky stuffed toy has a soft texture.
I alwasy gave my doll anytime, anywhere.
I alwasy gave my doll anytime, anywhere.
>> I always bring my doll anywhere.
Even when I go to the trip, or vacation I carried that doll.
>> Even when I go to on a trip or vacation, I carry with me my doll.
And I gave name to puppy doll.
And I gave name to puppy doll.
>> And I gave a name to it.
That name is \"YOi\".
That name is \"YOi\".
>> Its name is \"Yoi\".
I don\'t know why I choose that name.
>> Correct.
Now, I still have Yoi.
Now, I still have Yoi.
>> Correct.
I throw away another dolls but I can\'t throw Yoi.
>> I throw away the other dolls, but I can\'t throw Yoi.
Every time I go home I sleep together with Yoi. :)
Every time I go home I sleep together with Yoi. :)
>> Every time I go home, I sleep together with Yoi.
Now that doll is important thing for me beyond a doll.
Now that doll is important thing for me beyond a doll.
>> Now, this doll is a very important thing for me among other kinds of dolls.
It is like amulet to keep me. :)
It is like amulet to keep me. :)
>> It\'s like an amulet for me.
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