What was your favorite toy when you were a child? Who gave you this toy? Did it have a name? Do you

2022-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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I have my favority toy still now. I couldn\'t remember exactly. I think, when I was 7 years old. My mother bought it for me. It is a husky doll. It is funny, my teacher maine has husky too. I like animals dolls since I was child. especially dog dolls. My first doll was dog and my favorite doll was second, and it also dog. I like soft and smooth things. That husky doll has so soft texture. I alwasy gave my doll anytime, anywhere. Even when I go to the trip, or vacation I carried that doll. And I gave name to puppy doll. That name is \"YOi\". I don\'t know why I choose that name. Now, I still have Yoi. I throw away another dolls but I can\'t throw Yoi. Every time I go home I sleep together with Yoi. :) Now that doll is important thing for me beyond a doll. It is like amulet to keep me. :)

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]!
It\'s really a surprise.  Kids and ladies love these kinds of toys.   Keep your lovely toy with you.  Take a good time with your stuffed toy when you are alone.  ^^


~T. Maine

I have my favority toy still now. 
>> I still have my favorite toy. 
I couldn\'t remember exactly.
>> I couldn\'t remember it exactly. 
I think, when I was 7 years old. 
>> I think when I was 7 years old, 
My mother bought it for me.
>> my mother bought it for me. 
It is a husky doll. 
>> Correct. 
>>It is a husky dog stuff toy. 
It is funny, my teacher maine has husky too.
>> It is funny because my teacher has a husky too. 
I like animals dolls since I was child. especially dog dolls.
>> I have liked stuffed animals since I was a child, especially dog stuffed toys.  
My first doll was dog and my favorite doll was second, and it also dog.
>> My first doll was a dog as well as my second doll. 
I like soft and smooth things. 
>> Correct. 
That husky doll has so soft texture.
>> That husky stuffed toy has a soft texture. 
I alwasy gave my doll anytime, anywhere. 
>> I always bring my doll anywhere.
Even when I go to the trip, or vacation I carried that doll.
>> Even when I go to on a trip or vacation, I carry with me my doll. 
And I gave name to puppy doll.
>> And I gave a name to it. 
That name is \"YOi\". 
>> Its name is \"Yoi\".  
I don\'t know why I choose that name.
>> Correct. 
Now, I still have Yoi. 
>> Correct. 
I throw away another dolls but I can\'t throw Yoi.
>> I throw away the other dolls, but I can\'t throw Yoi. 
Every time I go home I sleep together with Yoi. :)
>> Every time I go home, I sleep together with Yoi. 
Now that doll is important thing for me beyond a doll.
>> Now, this doll is a very important thing for me among other kinds of dolls. 
It is like amulet to keep me. :)
>> It\'s like an amulet for me. 

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