What was your first day at work like?
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I moved new company just few month ago. so, I still remember that day.
I felt unfamiler everything and little bit nervous.
I also had some worries.
Beacuse, it was new challenge for me.
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Hi! I\'m so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I moved new company just few month ago. so, I still remember that day.
>> I moved to a new company just a few months ago, so I still remember that day clearly.
I felt unfamiler everything and little bit nervous.
>> Everything felt unfamiliar, and I was a little bit nervous.
I also had some worries. Beacuse, it was new challenge for me.
>> I also had some worries because it was a new challenge for me.
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