What was your first experience like when you started learning to drive?

2024-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I drove a car for the first time 10 years ago and I was so nervous and tired. I pushed the brake federal a lot and moved very slowly.

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Thank you for sharing your experience! It sounds like your first time driving was quite memorable.

~Kelly^^

I drove a car for the first time 10 years ago and I was so nervous and tired.

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OR:

>> Ten years ago, I drove a car for the first time, feeling nervous and tired.

I pushed the brake federal a lot and moved very slowly.

>> I pushed the brake pedal a lot and moved very slowly.

>> I pressed the brake pedal frequently and moved at a very slow pace.

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