What was your first job? Why did you decide to stop?
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Well, I used to work as a designer. It was a job to make 3D drawings with an autocad program in front of the computer. I worked for almost 8~9 hours while I was sitting down. That\'s why I quit that job because I can\'t stand to sit down for long time. And I need to do military service at that time. So, I decided to quit after 6 months. :)
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Thank you Eric for doing this homework. I know you are doing your best to do your part. Keep up the good work! ^^ ~ T.Gelly
Well, I used to work as a designer.
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It was a job to make 3D drawings with an autocad program in front of the computer.
>> It was a job where I made 3D drawings u[이름]g the Autocad program u[이름]g a computer.
I worked for almost 8~9 hours while I was sitting down.
>> I worked for almost 8 to 9 hours and just sat down.
That\'s why I quit that job because I can\'t stand to sit down for long time.
>> That\'s why I quit that job because I can\'t stand sitting down for a long time.
And I need to do military service at that time.
>> And I also need to do military service at that time.
So, I decided to quit after 6 months. :)
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