What was your greatest accomplishment in your life?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, throughout my whole life, there were several accomplishments. Among them, 3 years ago I bought my home. Even though I got a lone from a bank, I felt a sense of happiness and satisfaction. Apart from that, when I purchased furnitute and some kitchen products that I really wanted to, I was really excited.
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Hello [이름]!
You are indeed a very strong lady! Well, I must say that we are in the same boat when it comes to this accomplishment. having a safe and a place you can call your own home is one great accomplishment specially during this time of the pandemic where everyone is home- based.
Do not worry about the loan as God provides all financial support.
See you again soon in class.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Among them, 3 years ago I bought my home.
>> Correct!
Even though I got a lone from a bank, I felt a sense of happiness and satisfaction.
>> Correct!
Or: loan
Apart from that, when I purchased furnitute and some kitchen products that I really wanted to, I was really excited.
>> Correct!
>> Apart from that, when I purchased furniture and some kitchen products that I really wanted/ (wanted to buy), I was really excited.
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