What was your happiest childhood memory?

2014-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Tanya

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my happiest meory was playing with cat and now, happiest memory is playing with cat too. cat is best animal is my life ever

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Hi [이름] Ho! :)   Thank you for sending in your homework early. I appreciate it. :) So your also an animal lover too. Do you have a pet cat? Anyways, cats are really sweet and I think they are smarter than dogs at some point. :) Going to the homework, you can actually make two sentences from your first sentence. And also, don\'t forget the proper capitalization and punctuation marks for your sentences. :)   Have a great night my dear. :) I\'ll talk to you again tomorrow. :)   T. Tanya (\",)   my happiest meory was playing with cat and now, happiest memory is playing with cat too. >> My happiest memory was playing with cats. And now, my happiest memory is still playing with cats. cat is best animal is my life ever >> Cat is the best animal for me.

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