What was your happiest childhood memory?
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my happiest meory was playing with cat and now, happiest memory is playing with cat too. cat is best animal is my life ever
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Hi [이름] Ho! :)
Thank you for sending in your homework early. I appreciate it. :) So your also an animal lover too. Do you have a pet cat? Anyways, cats are really sweet and I think they are smarter than dogs at some point. :)
Going to the homework, you can actually make two sentences from your first sentence. And also, don\'t forget the proper capitalization and punctuation marks for your sentences. :)
Have a great night my dear. :)
I\'ll talk to you again tomorrow. :)
T. Tanya (\",)
my happiest meory was playing with cat and now, happiest memory is playing with cat too.
>> My happiest memory was playing with cats. And now, my happiest memory is still playing with cats.
cat is best animal is my life ever
>> Cat is the best animal for me.
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