What was your happiest childhood memory?
학생이 쓴 원문
I was a big fan of a train when I was young and I lived with grandparents.
So my grandfather sometimes took me bridge close to home where I can see train.
Whenever I find a train, I shouted, 'Grandfather, look at the passing train!'
This is my happinest childhood memory.
And now I'm really missing my grandfather.
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your childhood memory :)
I know this is a very precious moment in your life, and I hope you\'ll treasure it forever, especially your grandfather. :)
For sure, he is looking down on you everyday because you are a very good man.
See you in class later!
__Teacher Myra(\")(^^.)
I was a big fan of a train when I was young and I lived with grandparents.
>> I was a big fan of trains when I was young, and during that time, I lived with my grandparents.
So my grandfather sometimes took me bridge close to home where I can see train.
>> So one time, my grandfather took me to a bridge close to our home where I can see the train.
Whenever I find a train, I shouted, \'Grandfather, look at the passing train!\'
>> Whenever I see a train, I shout, \'Grandfather, look at the passing train!\'
This is my happinest childhood memory.
>> CORRECT (Careful with your spelling: happiest)
OR>> This is the best memory of my childhood years.
And now I\'m really missing my grandfather.
>> CORRECT
Thank you for sharing your childhood memory :)
I know this is a very precious moment in your life, and I hope you\'ll treasure it forever, especially your grandfather. :)
For sure, he is looking down on you everyday because you are a very good man.
See you in class later!
__Teacher Myra(\")(^^.)
I was a big fan of a train when I was young and I lived with grandparents.
>> I was a big fan of trains when I was young, and during that time, I lived with my grandparents.
So my grandfather sometimes took me bridge close to home where I can see train.
>> So one time, my grandfather took me to a bridge close to our home where I can see the train.
Whenever I find a train, I shouted, \'Grandfather, look at the passing train!\'
>> Whenever I see a train, I shout, \'Grandfather, look at the passing train!\'
This is my happinest childhood memory.
>> CORRECT (Careful with your spelling: happiest)
OR>> This is the best memory of my childhood years.
And now I\'m really missing my grandfather.
>> CORRECT
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