What was your most memorable experience while traveling?
학생이 쓴 원문
when i traveled in ROMA with my friends. my friend was steald bag for thief. so we visit police and we can\'t enjoyed this day. l believe we have new experience
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]! What happened to your friend was awful. Always be careful when you travel. Have a great weekend! ^^ See you next week!
~T. Jewel
when i traveled in ROMA with my friends.
>>The most memorable experience I had was when I traveled to Rome with my friends.
my friend was steald bag for thief.
>>A thief stole my friend\'s bag.
so we visit police and we can\'t enjoyed this day.
>> We had to go to a police station, so we weren\'t able to enjoy our day.
l believe we have new experience.
>>I think it was a new but memorable experience.
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