What was your most memorable Lunar New Year's celebration? Tell me more."

2013-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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It was about 10 years ago when I hit the road to visit my parents who was living in a country side. They were living in Jeonra provice which was located in 350 kilometers south of Seoul. It normally took me around four hours to get there by driving from Seoul but that time it was a long trip because I was lieteraly stuck in a traffice without moving an inch due to the heavy snow. The express way was full of cars and looked like a parking lot. I stayed in a traffic for 3 or 4 hours only to move forward a few kilometers. Some drivers got out of their vehicles to walk to a gas station to get some gas. It was a terrible experience that I won't forget for the last of my life.

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Sir [이름], I appreciate your effort in doing your homework. Keep up the good start! You made a very comprehensive answer to the homework. I am looking forward to having interactive classes with you. I wish that I can help you the best way I can. Let\'s work hard together for your improvement. We can do it! Take care and have a wonderful afternoon! T. Kate^^ It was about 10 years ago when I hit the road to visit my parents who was living in a country side. >> Correct They were living in Jeonra provice which was located in 350 kilometers south of Seoul. >> Correct It normally took me around four hours to get there by driving from Seoul but that time it was a long trip because I was lieteraly stuck in a traffice without moving an inch due to the heavy snow. >> Correct he express way was full of cars and looked like a parking lot. >> Correct I stayed in a traffic for 3 or 4 hours only to move forward a few kilometers. >> Correct Some drivers got out of their vehicles to walk to a gas station to get some gas. >> Correct It was a terrible experience that I won\'t forget for the last of my life. >> It was a terrible experience that I won\'t forget for the rest of my life.

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