What was your most memorable university/college experience?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, I think the experience of gathering and drinking with my classmates was the most memorable.
Because it was my first time drinking alcohol, I drank alcohol with my classmates who were the same age and I felt better, I think it was the most memorable.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you for submitting your answer! I really appreciate you for sharing your experience. You also did well with your sentences. I just did some minor corrections. ^^
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Well, I think the experience of gathering and drinking with my classmates was the most memorable.
>> CORRECT.
Because it was my first time drinking alcohol, I drank alcohol with my classmates who were the same age and I felt better,
>> Because it was my first time drinking alcohol, I drank with my classmates who were the same age as me, and I felt good.
I think it was the most memorable.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I think it was the most memorable experience.
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