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I have been to Jeju Island to get away from all of it with my family. I think Jeju is one of the most popular place to retreat for me because It has still and beautiful sea and wonderful nature where I can recover my body and spirit in. However, I went to Jeju in high peak season that I suffered from hustle and bustle in every spot that I visited during my stay in Jeju. But I was happy to see my children having awesome time in beautiful nature and seas. I felt light after I spent some time with my joyful children in wonderful nature of Jeju.

Hi Richard! Wow, it\'s good to know that you and your family had a lot of fun during your stay in Jeju Island. Thanks for sharing! Keep safe and have a blast day ahead!

~T. Annie



I have been to Jeju Island to get away from all of it with my family.
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I think Jeju is one of the most popular place to retreat for me because It has still and beautiful sea and wonderful nature where I can recover my body and spirit in.
>>I think Jeju is one of the most popular places to retreat to for me because it has a still, beautiful sea and wonderful nature where I can recover my body and spirit.
 However, I went to Jeju in high peak season that I suffered from hustle and bustle in every spot that I visited during my stay in Jeju.
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OR>>On the other hand, I went to Jeju at the height of the tourist season, so I experienced hustle and bustle in every spot I went to during my stay in Jeju.
But I was happy to see my children having awesome time in beautiful nature and seas.
>>CORRECT!
 I felt light after I spent some time with my joyful children in wonderful nature of Jeju.
>>I felt light after I spent some time with my joyful children in the wonderful nature of Jeju.
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