What was your unforgettable experience at work? Describe the events in detail.
학생이 쓴 원문
As I`ve already said that I had a great moment of my working history on the job planning something.
I`ve been doing my control area including middel-east especially U.A.E. and Saudi-arabia
The shipment that I had control have been stuck in the somewhere port. I didn`t remember the exact name
And so I had a challenge that was so hard to control. In this reason I had spent 2 weeks long in the U.A.E. region.
And getting a problem upper mentioned situation, which relates to all the hard degree of absence on the board including our company
stock. I manage to handle this so well, Finally I had caught up what the problem might happen. and fix it very clearly.
In this accident I never never forget my work expenience that I ever met.
강사 첨삭
Hi Justin,
Unforgettable moments give us memories that last forever and memories that we want to treasure are the unforgettable moments of our life. And these are the moments that last for a second but give a memory that is cherished forever. And unforgettable experiences lower your chances of regret and it builds a happy and positive life. When you create memorable experiences with your loved ones, you stop regretting the things that were bothering you for such a long time. Memories never die and you won\'t ever regret taking a vacation for yourself or your whole family to spend quality time and build good memories with them. ~ Teacher QUENNY..:)
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As I`ve already said that I had a great moment of my working history on the job planning something.
>> As I`ve already said, I had a great moment in my working history on the job planning.
I`ve been doing my control area including middel-east especially U.A.E. and Saudi-arabia.
>> I`ve been doing my control area including middle-east especially U.A.E. and Saudi Arabia.
The shipment that I had control have been stuck in the somewhere port. I didn`t remember the exact name.
>> The shipment that I had control of has been stuck in a port somewhere that I couldn\'t remember the exact name of the port.
And so I had a challenge that was so hard to control. In this reason I had spent 2 weeks long in the U.A.E. region.
>> And so I got a challenge that was so hard to control. For this reason, I spent 2 weeks long in the U.A.E. region.
And getting a problem upper mentioned situation, which relates to all the hard degree of absence on the board including our company stock.
>> And getting a problem in the upper mentioned situation, which relates to all the hard degree of absence on the board including our company stock.
I manage to handle this so well, Finally I had caught up what the problem might happen. and fix it very clearly.
>> I manage to handle this so well, Finally, I caught up on what the problem might happen and fixed it very clearly.
In this accident I never never forget my work expenience that I ever met.
>> Because of this accident, I never forget the work experience that I ever met.
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As I`ve already said that I had a great moment of my working history on the job planning something.
I`ve been doing my control area including middel-east especially U.A.E. and Saudi-arabia
The shipment that I had control have been stuck in the somewhere port. I didn`t remember the exact name
And so I had a challenge that was so hard to control. In this reason I had spent 2 weeks long in the U.A.E. region.
And getting a problem upper mentioned situation, which relates to all the hard degree of absence on the board including our company
stock. I manage to handle this so well, Finally I had caught up what the problem might happen. and fix it very clearly.
In this accident I never never forget my work expenience that I ever met.
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