What was your worst punishment as a child?
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my worst punishment as a child is that my mothers took my cellphone to me.
i hated that punishment.
so if i'm parents. i won't do that.
no matter they're parents, i think they are violating descendant's privacy!!!!!! please keep their privacy.
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my worst punishment as a child is that my mothers took my cellphone to me.
>> My worst punishment as a child was that my mother took my cellphone from me.
i hated that punishment.
>> I hate that punishment.
so if i\'m parents. i won\'t do that.
>> Once I become a parent, I won\'t do that.
no matter they\'re parents, i think they are violating descendant\'s privacy!!!!!!
>> Even when they\'re their parents, I don\'t think they have the right to violate their children\'s privacy.
please keep their privacy.
>> Please respect their privacy.
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