What ways did you obtain real satisfaction when you were on vacation?

Traveling can definitely give us real satisfaction regardless of what we do or where we visit for our vacation. We feel happy about leaving our home and the city where we are living. A break from the daily hectic schedule in a picturesque beach destination or any other peaceful place in the lap of nature makes us feel the value of fresh breezes and satisfaction that we are still alive. If we can forget about our work, meetings, calls, projects or sales numbers even for a short period of time, we can obtain happiness and satisfaction about our life. Looking at and talking with the people who seem to live differently in various aspects – they have different jobs, cultures, way of living, and so on - from the way you used to live can make us realize how valuable it is to breathe and how important your existence is. We can learn a lot from traveling. Another way to spend your vacation effectively is list up all the things you want to do beforehand. You can cross out one by one when you

Fabulous composition Sir [이름]! I definitely agree with you. People work hard to earn for a living so we also deserve to have a break. It is the time for us to be with your family and friends. We should always be thankful for what we have. It is because there are a lot of people who are not that fortunate like us to enjoy life. Thanks for an inspiring essay. Teacher Nina   Traveling can definitely give us real satisfaction regardless of what we do or where we visit for our vacation. >> correct >> OR: Traveling can definitely give us real satisfaction regardless of what we do or where go for a vacation. We feel happy about leaving our home and the city where we are living. >> correct >> OR: We are happy leaving our house and the city where we are residing. A break from the daily hectic schedule in a picturesque beach destination or any other peaceful place in the lap of nature makes us feel the value of fresh breezes and satisfaction that we are still alive. >> correct >> OR: A break from our daily routine in a picturesque beach destination or any other peaceful place in the lap of nature makes us feel the value of fresh breezes and satisfaction that we are still alive. If we can forget about our work, meetings, calls, projects or sales numbers even for a short period of time, we can obtain happiness and satisfaction about our life. >> correct >> OR: If we can forget about our work, meetings, calls, projects or sales numbers even for a short period of time, we can obtain happiness and satisfaction. Looking at and talking with the people who seem to live differently in various aspects – they have different jobs, cultures, way of living, and so on - from the way you used to live can make us realize how valuable it is to breathe and how important your existence is. >> correct >> OR:  Looking at and talking with the people who seem to live differently in various aspects ; they have different jobs, cultures, way of living, and so on from the way you used to live, it can make us realize how vital it is to breathe and how important your existence is. We can learn a lot from traveling. >> correct Another way to spend your vacation effectively is list up all the things you want to do beforehand. >> correct >> OR: Another way to have a wonderful trip and vacation is to make a list of the things you want to do beforehand. You can cross out one by one when you >> To be contiued. >> OR: You can cross out one by one when you already did it.