What weakness in the past that you already overcame?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a weakness with poor health. I get tired quickly no matter what I do. I lose my concentration quickly due to weak stamina. That\'s a big one of my prayer lists. If I am weak physically, I can\'t do anything. When I was pregnant, I got sick a lot. I stayed most of the time at the hospital. After I gave to birth my daughter, I lose my health more than usual. Also, when I drive a car, I have carsick serious. So I usually don\'t prefer to drive far or get an airplane. I have a trauma. I know my worst weakness is weak health. So when I meet people, I usually lost my energy a lot. After the meeting, I can\'t do anything. Sometimes I avoid meeting people. I would like to overcome it seriously. I go outside to walk with my daughter every day because of my health. I want to be a healthy mom to take care daughter well. Weak health increases fear. So I think a lot before taking action. That\'s one of my other weaknesses. So I am in need of God\'s help.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jane! I know that we both believe God is our Greatest Healer. Just stay positive and healthy! Take care always!-Faith-
I have a weakness with poor health. >> My weakness is my poor health.
I get tired quickly no matter what I do.
>> CORRECT
I lose my concentration quickly due to weak stamina.
>> CORRECT
That\'s a big one of my prayer lists.
>> That\'s one of my important prayer lists.
If I am weak physically, I can\'t do anything.
>> CORRECT
When I was pregnant, I got sick a lot.
>> CORRECT
I stayed most of the time at the hospital.
>> CORRECT
OR I had to be confined to the hospital oftentimes.
After I gave to birth my daughter, I lose my health more than usual.
>> After I gave birth to my daughter, my health deteriorated more than usual.
Also, when I drive a car, I have carsick serious.
>> Also, when I drive a car, I have a serious motion sickness.
So I usually don\'t prefer to drive far or get an airplane.
>> So, I usually don\'t prefer to drive far or take an airplane.
I have a trauma.
>> CORRECT
I know my worst weakness is weak health.
>> I know my worst weakness is my weak body.
So when I meet people, I usually lost my energy a lot.
>> So, when I meet people, I usually lose my energy a lot.
After the meeting, I can\'t do anything.
>> CORRECT
Sometimes I avoid meeting people.
>> Sometimes, I avoid meeting people.
I would like to overcome it seriously.
>> CORRECT
I go outside to walk with my daughter every day because of my health.
>> CORRECT
I want to be a healthy mom to take care daughter well.
>> I want to be a healthy mom to take care of my daughter well.
Weak health increases fear. So I think a lot before taking action.
>> A weak body increases fear, so I think a lot before taking actions.
That\'s one of my other weaknesses.
>> I must admit that\'s one of my other weaknesses.
So I am in need of God\'s help.
>> So, I am in need of God\'s help.
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