What website do you often use and why?
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I often use Google and Youtube.
First, if I have to search some datas, I search them on Google.
It is international website and there are a lot of datas so it is very useful.
Also, Google surves some survices for users so it is convenient.
Second, if I have my free time, I usually watch some videos on Youtube.
It surves a lot of survices too and there are so many kinds of videos.
So we can learn by Youtube and also we can enjoy our free time.
That\'s why I am using those kinds of websites.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
Those are really good applications and websites. I often use those too. :)
I often use Google and Youtube.
>> I often use Google and YouTube.
First, if I have to search some datas, I search them on Google.
>> First, if I have to search for some data, I use Google for it.
It is international website and there are a lot of datas so it is very useful.
>> It\'s an international website and there are a lot of useful data in there.
Also, Google surves some survices for users so it is convenient.
>> Also, Google services for users is so convenient.
Second, if I have my free time, I usually watch some videos on Youtube.
>Second, if I have my free time, I usually watch some videos on YouTube.
It surves a lot of survices too and there are so many kinds of videos.
>> it offers a lot of services too and there are so many videos to watch.
So we can learn by Youtube and also we can enjoy our free time.
>> I can learn and enjoy by watching on YouTube.
That\'s why I am using those kinds of websites.
>> That\'s why I use those kinds of websites.
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