What weird things in one’s bucket list have you heard of? Would you give them a shot?
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I think the weirdest bucket list I\'ve ever heard of is to learn how to breathe in the water without an oxygen tank.
I think it\'s impossible without any equipments.
And I don\'t think she should try it because it\'s dangerous.
She can be drowned and die.
So I think swimming with an oxygen tank is like the same things because we can see the beautiful creatures.
It\'s not to try something that you are not sure if it\'s going to work. You can ask to someone and get some advice. :-)
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What weird things in one’s bucket list have you heard of? Would you give them a shot?
I think the weirdest bucket list I\'ve ever heard of is to learn how to breathe in the water without an oxygen tank.
>>> I think the weirdest bucket list I\'ve ever heard of is to be able to learn how to breathe underwater without an oxygen tank.
I think it\'s impossible without any equipments.
>>> I think it\'s impossible without any equipment.
And I don\'t think she should try it because it\'s dangerous.
>>> CORRECT
She can be drowned and die.
>>> CORRECT
So I think swimming with an oxygen tank is like the same things because we can see the beautiful creatures.
>>> So I think swimming with or without an oxygen tank is the same because we can see the beautiful creatures underwater in either way.
It\'s not to try something that you are not sure if it\'s going to work. You can ask to someone and get some advice.
>>> It\'s not to try something that you are not sure if it\'s going to work. You can ask to someone and get some advice.
OR: If you\'re not sure if it\'s going to work then better ask advice from the expert.
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