What were some acts of sweet kindness your friends showed to you?

My best friends Eric showed to me some acts of sweet kidness was hug me.He usually hug me when we meet or say goodbye.This expression is his greeting.We are the best friend.So I think it is not enough to say hi or say goodbye.I think that is the good way for greeting. <Story Time> Sally was very tired.So, she get up at 10:00.Sally go to the mountain.She find some food.She eat all of the food.And she back home.I was very full.But her mother and father are went to the supermarket.She touch magic ring.She flew to the hotel."Where am I."asked she."You are in the hotel."said owner."Oh my got."said Sally.Sally find out why she is in the hotel.Finally she find the women call the magic word.So Sally find women and not allowed to she called the magic word.

Hello there [이름]! Happy Thursday!   I just want to say thank you for making good compositions for me to check. I am very happy for that. I wish that your friendship with Eric will last forever. ^_^   Your grammars or your sentence constructions also improved and I commend you for that but I also want you to spare some of your time to check some of your mistakes and hoping that you would not commit them again next time. Okay? ^_^   I like your story about Sally and the magic ring that she found. I like the way how you organized the story and I think you have a future in story making. I hope to read more of your stories.   All in all, you did a great job!   Have a great weekend [이름].   -T. Liza My best friends Eric showed to me some acts of sweet kidness was hug me.>>My best friend Eric usually hugs me to show me his act of sweet kindness.He usually hug me when we meet or say goodbye.>>CORRECT.OR: He usually hugs me everytime we meet or say our goodbyes.This expression is his greeting.>>He does these as his way of greeting. We are the best friend.>>We are best of friends.>>He is my best friend and so am I to him.So I think it is not enough to say hi or say goodbye.>>CORRECT.OR: That\'s why it is not enough to say hi or goodbye to our friends.I think that is the good way for greeting.>>I think that it is one of the good ways of greeting someone.<Story Time>Sally was very tired.>>CORRECT.OR: Sally had a very tiring day yesterday.So, she get up at 10:00.>>That is why she woke up at 10 o\'clock in the morning. Sally go to the mountain.>>Sally went to the mountain.>>OR: She went up the mountain.She find some food.>>She was looking for some food.>>While on her way up, she found a food.She eat all of the food.>>CORRECT.OR: She ate all of them.And she back home.>>Then after eating, she headed back home.>>She went home.I was very full.>>She was very full.>>She had enough.But her mother and father are went to the supermarket.>>When she was at home, her parents were not around.>>Her parents went to supermarket.She touch magic ring.>>She touched a magic ring.>>She found a magic ring and touched it.She flew to the hotel.>>She was transported on a hotel.>>While touching it, she was transferred to a hotel.\"Where am I.\"asked she.>>\"Where am I?\",she asked.>>She said,\"Where am I?\"\"You are in the hotel.\"said owner.>>\"You are in a hotel.\"said the owner.\"Oh my got.\"said Sally.>>\"Oh my gosh.\"said Sally.Sally find out why she is in the hotel.>>Sally make a way to find out why she was in a hotel.>>Sally seek for an explanation why she was there.Finally she find the women call the magic word.>>While looking for an answer, she found a woman saying the magic word.>>She found out that a woman who knows a magic spell.So Sally find women and not allowed to she called the magic word.>>So she asked her to spell the magic word but she was not indulge.>>She asked the woman to cast the spell but she was not indulged.