What were you really into when you were a kid?

Good day Sir [이름]!

Thank you for writing another composition for me. I appreciate it! Playing computer games is alright if we learn how to use it appropriately. Let us not make electronic devices as a replacement to supplement our child\'s needs. Technology helps us bring closer to our family after all. You were great, keep it up!

~Teacher Eunice

The think I was interested in is computer game. 

>> I think I was interested in computer games. 
I visited my friend home almost every day because I did not have computer game device.

>> I visited my friend\'s home almost every day because I did not have my own computer game device.

>> I visited my friend\'s house every day because I didn\'t have my own computer.

I remember I really loved playing game with my friend rather than playing outside.

>> I remember, I really loved playing computer game with my friend rather than playing with other kids outside.

When I think about it, It was not good behavior.

>> When I come to think of it now, I know it was not a good behavior.

I would better learn something or read the books. 

>> It would be better to learn something or read the books.  

The situation I was in is that my parents were working until late night, so I did not have any chance playing with my parents.

>>The situation I had was that my parents were working until late night, so I did not have any chance to play with my parents.  

I think everybody agree that playing with children is very important.

>>  Correct!

It affect child\'s emotion and improve their ability when they are growing up.

>> It affects child\'s emotional development and helps improve their ability while they are growing up.