What were your best and worst trips?

2021-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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1. What were your best and worst trips? We had always decided the place to take trip beforehand. My wife and I have been to several countries with our pleasure mind. So I do not particularly remember the worst trip. I think that traveling enjoy seeing the beautiful view, and having delicious food. 2. Where do prefer staying while on vacation? I will prefer staying in Thailand, if I go on on vacation for a month. I have been to Thailand three times before. It was good to be Thais kindness and food.

강사 첨삭

Hi Huje,
Thank you and have a wonderful weekend!
It was nice to have you in one of my classes!
Talk to you later!
Teacher Elly.
What were your best and worst trips?
1. What were your best and worst trips?
We had always decided the place to take trip beforehand. 
>>We have always decided on the place where we would like to take a trip beforehand. 
My wife and I have been to several countries with our pleasure mind. 
>>My wife and I have been to several countries for pleasure in mind. 
So I do not particularly remember the worst trip. 
CORRECT!
or>>So I do not remember having a worst trip before. 
I think that traveling enjoy seeing the beautiful view, and having delicious food.
>>I think that traveling helps us enjoy looking at beautiful views and having delicious foods.
2. Where do prefer staying while on vacation?
I will prefer staying in Thailand, if I go on on vacation for a month. 
>>I prefer to stay in Thailand, if I go on a vacation for a month.
I have been to Thailand three times before. 
CORRECT!
or>>I have been to Thailand before, for about three times. 
It was good to be Thais kindness and food.
>>It was good for me to experience the Thais\' kindness and eat their delicious food.

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