What were your best and worst trips?
학생이 쓴 원문
My best trip is went Osaka Japan.
Because that is my first free trip, Not using travel agency!
I like Japan\'s quiet mood. So I planed appropriate to me.
That experience was interesting!
And I don\'t have worst trip.. But if I have to pick one that is my honeymoon in bali.
Because I had a terrible stomachache and my husband had a skin pain.
My husband felt happy that he met summer in january. So he suntan his skin without suncream.
It caused pain in his skin..
And I ate a lot of ice because there is hot and humid.
It caused stomachache. So we can\'t do our schedule 2 days.
But I only felt 2 days memory worst.. another days I really really happy!
강사 첨삭
Angela,
Thank you for sharing a story about your trips. Remember that on every trip we shall have something to remember. it may be good or bad, memories that we will never forget. I also remember my trip to Thailand in 2018. It was both a good and bad memory when we got lost on our way, thankfully a \"Samaritan\" helped us find our way back.
enjoy the day!
Aki~
My best trip is went Osaka Japan.
>>> CORRECT!
Because that is my first free trip, Not using travel agency!
>>> Because that was my first free trip, Not using a travel agency!
I like Japan\'s quiet mood. So I planed appropriate to me.
>>> I like Japan\'s quiet mood. So I planned what was appropriate for me.
That experience was interesting!
>>> CORRECT!
And I don\'t have worst trip.. But if I have to pick one that is my honeymoon in bali.
>>> And I don\'t have the worst trip, but if I have to pick one that is my honeymoon in Bali.
Because I had a terrible stomachache and my husband had a skin pain.
>>> Because I had a terrible stomachache and my husband had a pain on his skin.
>>> Because I had a terrible stomachache and my husband got sunburned.
My husband felt happy that he met summer in January.
>>> My husband felt happy that he experienced summer in January.
So he suntan his skin without suncream.
>>> So he suntan his skin without suncream.
It caused pain in his skin..
>>> CORRECT!
And I ate a lot of ice because there is hot and humid.
>>> And I ate a lot of ice cream because it was hot and humid.
It caused stomachache. So we can\'t do our schedule 2 days.
>>> It gave me stomach so we can\'t follow our schedule for two days.
But I only felt 2 days memory worst.. another days I really really happy!
>>> But those two days are our worst memory, the rest of our trip was fun!
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