What were your favorite foods growing up?
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I couldn’t remember my exact preference of food when I was growing up. My mother said that I was too picky to eat balanced. As my mother saying, because I’m still picky, I have only disliking food. Thus, I can’t pick the best one among many foods. Instead of that, I want to say about the food I always drank. I drank milk a lot because my mother always applied the milk meal at my school days. Because of milk meal, milk was my friend, and I drank it regularly. Therefore, I can say I really often drink milk when I was growing up.
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Hi [이름]!
Parents love giving us milk.
Milk was always part of our breakfast too when we were young.
I couldn’t remember my exact preference of food when I was growing up.
>>> CORRECT!
My mother said that I was too picky to eat balanced.
>>> My mother said I was too picky to eat a balanced meal.
As my mother saying, because I’m still picky, I have only disliking food.
>>> As my mother said, I am still picky.
Thus, I can’t pick the best one among many foods.
>>> CORRECT!
Instead of that, I want to say about the food I always drank.
>>> Instead, I want to talk about the food I always eat.
I drank milk a lot because my mother always applied the milk meal at my school days.
>>> I drank a lot of milk because my mom used to gave me milk.
Because of milk meal, milk was my friend, and I drank it regularly.
>>> Milk was my friend because of milk, and I drank milk regularly.
Therefore, I can say I really often drink milk when I was growing up.
>>> CORRECT!
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