What were your ideal jobs when you were a kid?
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Uhmmmm, when I was little, I had dreams a lot like being a cop, fireman, president and etc. Even if I couldn\'t make anything else. The reason why I decided to being a mechanic of airplane was just following my older sister after military service. But now, I have a big dream that is known as genius mechanic and engineer in the world. :)
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleUhmmmm, when I was little, I had dreams a lot like being a cop, fireman, president and etc.
>> When I was little, I have dreamed of becoming a cop, a fireman, a president, etc.
OR >> When I was little, I have dreamed of becoming a cop, a fireman, a president, and many more.
Even if I couldn\'t make anything else.
>> Even if I couldn\'t make anything else, the reason why I decided to become an airplane mechanic was just following my older sister after doing my military service.
The reason why I decided to being a mechanic of airplane was just following my older sister after military service.
>> Even if I couldn\'t make anything else, the reason why I decided to become an airplane mechanic was just following my older sister after doing my military service.
But now, I have a big dream that is known as genius mechanic and engineer in the world. :)
>> CORRECT!
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