What will be the quality of our life in the future if humans will continue to destroy the nature? De
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I think there will be no clean water, fresh foods and air.
Natures will be ruined and forests are becoming cities.
There will be no animals except humans and their pets.
There will be no clean water, so we will have to drink polluted water.
And also we won\'t have any meats or veggies so we will have to eat bugs.
If we don\'t want to live like this we have to make our Earth clean one by one.
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What will be the quality of our life in the future if humans will continue to destroy the nature? Describe it.
I think there will be no clean water, fresh foods and air.
>>> I think there will be no clean water, no fresh foods, and air.
Natures will be ruined and forests are becoming cities.
>>> Nature will be ruined and forests will become cities.
There will be no animals except humans and their pets.
>>> CORRECT
OR: Animals will be extinct except for humans and their pets.
There will be no clean water, so we will have to drink polluted water.
>>> CORRECT
OR: It will be hard to find for clean water to drink.
And also we won\'t have any meats or veggies so we will have to eat bugs.
>>> Also, we won\'t have any meats or veggies so we will have to eat bugs.
If we don\'t want to live like this we have to make our Earth clean one by one.
>>> If we don\'t want to live like this, then we have to start to save our Earth now before it\'s too late.
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