What will be your first reaction if you meet a famous movie star?
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If I meet a famous person, maybe I will be surprised.
Actually, I met a famous star long time ago.
When I was nineteen, I met Tae-Hee Kim who is the most beautiful female actor in Korea at that time.
I was surprised and yelled at that time.
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If I meet a famous person, maybe I will be surprised.
Actually, I met a famous star long time ago.
When I was nineteen, I met Tae-Hee Kim who is the most beautiful female actor in Korea at that time.
I was surprised and yelled at that time.
Actually, I met a famous star long time ago.
When I was nineteen, I met Tae-Hee Kim who is the most beautiful female actor in Korea at that time.
I was surprised and yelled at that time.
>> If I met a famous person, maybe I will be surprised. Actually, I met a famous star a long time ago. When I was nineteen, I met Tae-Hee Kim who is the most beautiful actress / female actor in Korea at that time. I was surprised and yelled out loud at that time.
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