What will be your New Year\'s Resolution this coming new year?
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What will be your New Year\'s Resolution this coming new year?
I will make New Year\'s resolutions list within this year.
Firstly, my New Year\'s resolution is improving my English skill than last year.
Making realistic goal is important. I am trying to achieve my goal.
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Those are great resolutions. I hope you will achieve all of them. :)
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I will make New Year\'s resolutions list within this year.
>> I will make a New Year\'s resolutions list within this year.
>> I will make a New Year\'s resolutions list within this year.
Firstly, my New Year\'s resolution is improving my English skill than last year.
>> First, my New year\'s resolution is to improve my English skills more than last year.
Making realistic goal is important.
>>Making realistic goals are important.
I am trying to achieve my goal.
>> CORRECT
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