What will be your plan, if you will not be spending your big holidays going to grandma\'s house?
학생이 쓴 원문
Going abroad with my family will be great. Big holidays in Korea are usually 4-10days long(it depends on our luck of every year!), so if we are lucky enough, we can spend more than a week traveling abroad. However, I like to go to grandmother\'s house and meet my relatives and feel its warm atmosphere. So traveling with our relatives would be great too.(Only if other people don\'t think the same as us or we can\'t afford the airplane.)
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름] [이름]!
I guess this plan would be great especially if all of you have planned this (prepared financially and physically) for a long time. Traveling with the whole family is also one of my bucket lists.
See you in class!
T. Aki~
Going abroad with my family will be great.
>>> CORRECT!
Big holidays in Korea are usually 4-10 days long(it depends on our luck of every year!), so if we are lucky enough, we can spend more than a week traveling abroad.
>>> Big holidays in Korea are usually 4-10 days long(it depends on our luck every year!), so if we are lucky enough, we can spend more than a week traveling abroad.
However, I like to go to grandmother\'s house and meet my relatives and feel its warm atmosphere.
>>> However, I like to go to my grandmother\'s house and meet my relatives and feel its warm atmosphere.
So traveling with our relatives would be great too. (Only if other people don\'t think the same as us or we can\'t afford the airplane.
>>> CORRECT!
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