What will happen if we keep polluting the environment?

2016-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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There are various kinds of environmental pollutions such as air pollution, land pollution, light pollution, noise pollution, water pollution, vision pollution, thermal pollution. Thermal pollution is the increase of temperature caused by human activities. Light pollution is the brightening of the night sky inhibiting the visibility of stars and planets by the use of improper lighting of communities. We can simply be aware how the consequence would be if we keep polluting the environment. Environmental pollution had been a fact of life for many centuries but it became a real problem since the start of the industrial revolution. Some of the effects of air pollution include asthma, reduced energy levels, irritation of eyes, disruption of the immune system, malfunction of the central nervous system, and cancer. Water pollution can cause skin rashes & allergies, all sorts of water-borne infections, vomiting & stomach aches, malfunction of the central nervous system and so on.

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There are various kinds of environmental pollutions such as air pollution, land pollution, light pollution, noise pollution, water pollution, vision pollution, thermal pollution.

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Thermal pollution is the increase of temperature caused by human activities.

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Light pollution is the brightening of the night sky inhibiting the visibility of stars and planets by the use of improper lighting of communities.

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We can simply be aware how the consequence would be if we keep polluting the environment.

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Environmental pollution had been a fact of life for many centuries but it became a real problem since the start of the industrial revolution.

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Some of the effects of air pollution include asthma, reduced energy levels, irritation of eyes, disruption of the immune system, malfunction of the central nervous system, and cancer.

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Water pollution can cause skin rashes & allergies, all sorts of water-borne infections, vomiting & stomach aches, malfunction of the central nervous system and so on.

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