What will I do in this summer?

2021-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

In fact, I would want to go to the Philippines during the summer vacation. However I can\'t go there because of Corona, so I plan to visit Jeju Island this summer. Because I want to climb Mt. Halla once more.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!

I wish you could visit the Philippines too.

I bet you would have so much fun.

Let\'s hope that everything would get better.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

In fact, I would want to go to the Philippines during the summer vacation.

>> Honestly, I would want to go to the Philippines during the summer vacation.
However I can\'t go there because of Corona, so I plan to visit Jeju Island this summer.

>> Correct
Because I want to climb Mt. Halla once more.

>> It\'s because I want to climb Mt. Halla once more.

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