What will my score will be like?

2018-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Today result was not satistifed to me.Because at technology I got 88.But I am proud of I got a perfect score on ethics.Tommorrrow there will be a math and history and music.Math is really difficult subject but I have to get over 85.Because I stopped my math academy and I have to study harder than before.And my traget in this last exam is getting a 90 in avarage.I hope I can get a good score on math,science,and chinese.

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Today result was not satistifed to me.

>> Today\'s test results didn\'t satisfy me.

or

>> Today\'s test result is not satisfactory.

Because at technology I got 88.But I am proud of I got a perfect score on ethics.

>> Because on technology I got 88. But I\'m proud that I got a perfect score on Ethics.

Tommorrrow there will be a math and history and music.

>> Tomorrow, there will be Math, History and Music.

Math is really difficult subject but I have to get over 85.Because I stopped my math academy and I have to study harder than before.

>>  Math is really a difficult subject but I have to get over 85. Because I stopped my math academy and I have to study harder than before.

And my traget in this last exam is getting a 90 in avarage.I hope I can get a good score on math,science,and chinese.

>> My target this last exam is to get 90 in average. I hope I can get good scores on Math, Science and Chinese.

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