What will the city of the future look like?
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The city will develop in the future.
In the future, the city will be moved by many technology like a auto-driving system.
the technology is developing everyday. and the human will experience many technology than now.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!^^
We are moving towards an increasingly urban world. I agree that technology will see more auto driving cars. We may see flying vehicles, mega bridges, super-connected street experiences, and underground spaces.
Always,
Kelly^^
The city will develop in the future.
>> Correct
In the future, the city will be moved by many technology like a auto-driving system.
>> In the future, the city will be moved by many technology like an auto-driving system.
the technology is developing everyday.
>> Technology is developing every day.
and the human will experience many technology than now.
>> And humans will experience many technology than now.
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