What will you buy for your family once you started earning your own money?
학생이 쓴 원문
In Korea, There is a custom of buying a red long johns for the first salary and giving them to parents.
But I think this is a old-fashioned way, so I\'ll treat to beef for my family.
I think it\'s a way that make my family happy as soon as possible.
강사 첨삭
Hi Julia!
Does giving red long johns have a significant meaning? Well, I guess anything that would show your appreciation to them make your parents happy and proud of you. I remember bringing my parents to a buffet restaurant on my first salary and guess what, they did not forget about that ^^ Take care!
T. Aki~
In Korea, There is a custom of buying a red long johns for the first salary and giving them to parents.
>>> In Korea, there is a custom of buying red long johns for the first salary and giving them to parents.
But I think this is a old-fashioned way, so I\'ll treat to beef for my family.
>>> But I think this is an old-fashioned way, so I\'ll treat my family with beef.
I think it\'s a way that make my family happy as soon as possible.
>>> I think it\'s a way that makes my family happy as soon as possible.
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