What will you choose career or love and why?
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Hi, Yeong^^
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Maybe I will choose career because if I get a job, I will do my best for my career and improve my skills, a good career also can make me for a better life, after then if I quit my job at the company, I would(?)make a own business or I am still going to work at the company. On the other hands I think I regret a little bit when I decide to love and giving up career prospect.
>>[Do you mean: ]Maybe I will choose my career because if I have got a job, I will do my best for my career and improve my skills. If you have a good career you can also have a better life, after that if I quit my job at the company, I would make a own business or I am still going to work at the company. On the other hand, I think I will regret a little bit if decided to choose love and giving up my career.
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