what will you do,If corona virus disappear?
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when corona virus disappear, First l will go to coin karaoke with my friends.
Second,I will travel to Yeosu with my family.
Lately, l will go to Jeju to meet my grandparents and cousins.
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I hope it disappears soon!!
when corona virus disappear, First l will go to coin karaoke with my friends.
>> When Corona virus disappears, first l will go to karaoke with my friends.
Second,I will travel to Yeosu with my family.
>> Second, I will travel to Yeosu with my family.
Lately, l will go to Jeju to meet my grandparents and cousins.
>> Lastly, l will go to Jeju to meet my grandparents and cousins.
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