What will you do if somebody gave you $1,000,000
학생이 쓴 원문
If somebody gave me $1,000,000, I buy a building which give me the rent fee.
If so, I get a lot of money once a month.
And I quit my job. Instead, I accept short term teaching position.
Its salary is low, but I can accept position which I want.
For example, good school, situation which I can commute at the home.
And salary is not a problem, because I can get a rent fee.
And I rest at the home when I don\'t go to the work.
Because of short term teaching position, I can not go to the school everyday.
강사 첨삭
Good day [이름]! Thank you for your interesting answer to your homework. I would also do the same if given the chance (hehe). :)
If so, I get a lot of money once a month.
And I quit my job.
Its salary is low, but I can accept position which I want.
For example, good school, situation which I can commute at the home.
And salary is not a problem, because I can get a rent fee.
And I rest at the home when I don\'t go to the work.
Because of short term teaching position, I can not go to the school everyday.
If somebody gave me $1,000,000, I buy a building which give me the rent fee.
>>> If somebody will give me $1,000,000 I will buy a building and make it an apartment.
If so, I get a lot of money once a month.
>>> If that happens, I will be able to get a lot of money every month.
And I quit my job.
>>> I will also quit my job.
Instead, I accept short term teaching position.
>>> I will accept short term teaching position instead.
Its salary is low, but I can accept position which I want.
>>> The salary is low, but I can do the job that I like.
For example, good school, situation which I can commute at the home.
>>> For example, I can work in a good school and commute from home to my workplace.
And salary is not a problem, because I can get a rent fee.
>>> Salary will not be a problem because I can get rental fee monthly.
And I rest at the home when I don\'t go to the work.
>>> I can also rest at home when I don\'t have work.
Because of short term teaching position, I can not go to the school everyday.
>>> Because it is just a short term teaching position, I don\'t need to go to school everyday.
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