What will you do if someone eavesdrops on your conversation with your friend?
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In all honesty, I don\'t care about whether someone eavesdrops on my conversation or not. It\'s because I don\'t know who they are. I think even if they hear about it, they don\'t do anything else. Of course, they would think about us as bastards if I talked about cheating on someone with my friends. But, they won\'t do anything else. As time has flying, people don\'t care about each other than before. When I was younger, people used to help each other. But, not anymore.
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
In all honesty, I don\'t care about whether someone eavesdrops on my conversation or not.
>> CORRECT!It\'s because I don\'t know who they are.
>> CORRECT!I think even if they hear about it, they don\'t do anything else.
>> I think even if they hear about it, they can\'t do anything about it.
Of course, they would think about us as bastards if I talked about cheating on someone with my friends.
>> CORRECT!But, they won\'t do anything else.
>> CORRECT!
As time has flying, people don\'t care about each other than before.
>> As time flies, people don\'t care about each other than before.
When I was younger, people used to help each other.
>> CORRECT!But, not anymore.
>> CORRECT!
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