What will you do if you didn\'t do your purpose on a business trip?
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I am a software engineer. If I didn\'t do my purpose on a business trip, it will be a reason, I made a software which has errors or I misunderstood client\'s requirements. If it happens, I would come back to my office, And I analyze a problem. And I go on a business again. I will get a low evaluation, because of going on business trips twice. But finishing work is more import. The worst situation is making a problem in business trip when I go to other country. I can\'t come back, although I have problems. I should achieve business trip\'s goal while a business trip period. If I fail to achieve the goal, I have no choice. These days is better than before, because of the development of It environment.
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Hello Il [이름],
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What will you do if you didn\'t do your purpose on a business trip?
I am a software engineer.
>>> CORRECT
If I didn\'t do my purpose on a business trip, it will be a reason, I made a software which has errors or I misunderstood client\'s requirements.
>>> If I didn\'t do my purpose on a business trip because of the following reasons; I made software that has errors or I misunderstood the client\'s requirements.
If it happens, I would come back to my office, And I analyze a problem. And I go on a business again.
>>> If it happens, I would come back to my office, and I analyze a problem then I\'ll go back.
I will get a low evaluation, because of going on business trips twice. But finishing work is more import.
>>> I will get a low evaluation, because of going on business trips twice but finishing work is more import.
The worst situation is making a problem in business trip when I go to other country.
>>> The worst situation is making a problem in a business trip in another country.
I can\'t come back, although I have problems.
>>> For the reason that I can\'t come back, although I have problems.
I should achieve business trip\'s goal while a business trip period.
>>> I should achieve the business trip\'s goal in the allotted period.
If I fail to achieve the goal, I have no choice.
>>> If I fail to achieve the goal, I have no choice but to make it work and succeed.
These days is better than before, because of the development of It environment.
>>> These days are better than before, because of the development of the IT environment.
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