What will you do if you experience discrimination when you visit a different country and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
actually, I can\'t do anything. because there\'s not my country. If I fight the foreigners, even they discriminate me, the police probably protect their people. many foreigners who came in korea for money is discriminated while they work. but most of them couldn\'t fight. because they can\'t speak korean well and the police protect their people \"korean\" first.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Discrimination is a very serious problem that a lot of people are facing. Mostly foreigners who visit other countries experience this the most. This should be put to a stop for the safety of everyone. Not only does it affect us emotionally, but mentally and physically as well. So when you see someone being discriminated, try to stand up for them so that this behavior won\'t be tolerated :)
actually, I can\'t do anything.
>> Actually, I can\'t do anything about it because I am not i my own country.
because there\'s not my country.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
If I fight the foreigners, even they discriminate me, the police probably protect their people. many foreigners who came in korea for money is discriminated while they work.
>> If I fight with the foreigners regardless of what they did, the police would still protect their people. Many foreigners come to Korea to earn money and still get discriminated while they work.
but most of them couldn\'t fight.
>> Most of them couldn\'t fight back because they can\'t speak in Korean and the police would protect the Korean citizens as well.
because they can\'t speak korean well and the police protect their people \"korean\" first.
>> CONNNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
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