What will you do if you experience discrimination when you visit a different country and why?
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I think I will just avoid that situation. There are some crimes realsted with dicrimination so I think if I do something then I will get in trouble. Still, there are many troubles about dicrimination and I think people should be change.
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Hi [이름]! Discrimination is a very serious problem that a lot of people are facing. Mostly foreigners who visit other countries experience this the most. This should be put to a stop for the safety of everyone. Not only does it affect us emotionally, but mentally and physically as well. So when you see someone being discriminated, try to stand up for them so that this behavior won\'t be tolerated :)
I think I will just avoid that situation.
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There are some crimes realsted with dicrimination so I think if I do something then I will get in trouble.
>> There are some crimes related with discrimination so I think if I do something then I will get in trouble.
Still, there are many troubles about dicrimination and I think people should be change.
>>Still, there are many troubles caused by discrimination and I think people should be change.
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